小学英语作文写作技巧「解析」

2022-02-01 英语写作指导

  一:用介词短语替代从句,例:

  原句:While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

  修改后:During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

  原句:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

  修改后:At the second traffic light turn left.

  二:删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语,例:

  句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

  修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

  注:把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉,这只会引起最少的变动。

  三:剔除你不需要的单词,例:

  Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

  写完这样的句子后,你自己再读一遍,挑出单词"joint"和"telephone",注意删去不必要的词。

  英语写作注意两点

  一、先审题,弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提,也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题,语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面:

  1.认真地看两遍题目,包括提示,全面了解写作要求。

  2.理清思路,确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

  二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

  从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量,将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”:多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。