President of Tongji University Jan. 28,20xxDear Sir or Madam,I am a girl of seventeen. What I'd like to say first of all is that I have beenlonging to be admitted into Tongji University since my childhood, for it is the bestuniversity in which one can study architecture.I've been interested in science and engineering, especially architecture since Iwas about five. I began learning painting at ten, and I've visited many beautifulcities including Beijing and Qingdao to see the typical ancient or western buildings.As one of the fans of Bei Yuming (贝聿铭) , I appreciate his famous designs andvisited his latest works, Suzhou Museum.
My ambition is to become an architectlike him. To realize my dream, I study hard and all my examination records areamong the best. I've got some prizes in my hobbies, watercolor painting andswimming, and as an athlete, I'm healthy enough to face the toughest task in theuniversity.
Surely I am among the best candidates,and I hope you will be so kind as toconsider my application. Thanks, Yours trulyHuang Lei(192 words)
when you're young,everything feels like the end of the world. it's not. it's just the beginning. you might have to meet a few more jerks. but one day you are going to meet a boy who treats you the way that you deserve to be treated, like the sun rises and sets with you.
To whom it may concern,
I deem it a great pleasure to write this letter of reference on behalf of Miss xxx to support her application to study in your university.
I am the dean of Finance School in Shanghai University of Finance and Economics, and Miss xxx is one of my students majoring in International Finance. I have known her very well in terms of personality and academic performance. The intelligent nature and sense of logical analysis make her powerful in mastering complicated theories. In her active participation in the campus activities, she has demonstrated her intellectual independence as well as impressive ability. Additionally, she expresses her ideas clearly and has good analytical skills, which give me deep impression. For example, Zhao once participated in the debate competition and worked as the fourth debater. She took charge of free debate and summary remarks that were very important in the competition. To my surprise, Miss xxx finished the task very excellently thanks to her agile mind and quick analysis ability. Miss xxx clearly analyzed the opposite side’s weaknesses, simultaneously; she also conquered many committee members. Because of their good performance and cooperation, they finally obtained outstanding result. Miss xxx was awarded the honor of “The Best Debater”.
Apart from her intelligence, Miss xxx was an independent and energetic girl who took part in many large-scale activities enthusiastically. I found that xxx took part in most of the activities and did a nice job. In 20xx she took part in the badminton competition and got the champion of women's doubles. Besides, Miss xxx had good teamwork spirit and cooperated with the schoolmates tacitly.
Based on my appreciation of such an ambitious student who receives the challenge bravely, I strongly support She’s decision of higher academic pursuit without reservation. And I sincerely hope my recommendation will receive your favorable consideration.
Miss xxx requested a letter of reference from me to support her application for graduate studies at your university. As her tutor when she prepared her project design for graduation, I am pleased to comply with her request.
I became acquainted with Miss xxx when I met her beautiful writing on her mathematic assignments and I remembered her name at once. When I taught her, she always sat on the left place behind the classroom, then I asked her why, she answered me that she likes to see all corners of classroom with smiles on her face. But I was astonished by her learning ability; she listened to my lesson with her thought, especially when I taught them some emphases and difficulties of the course, she always listened to me earnestly and recorded these difficulties on her note carefully, after class, she came to me and talked about these questions which included some principle of mathematics, I was impressed by her unique views about mathematics which reflected her thought and logic better than other students.
It was worthy to mention her learning ability on mathematics, for example, I didn’t finish my predication logic lesson because of limit time and just simply mentioned the concept, when I checked students’ assignments and found only she gave me prefect answer with deductive ways and her thought was very clear. Meanwhile I was gratified by her apperception ability and self-taught ability, she was a girl with nimbus and big potential. Besides her apply ability was also very strong. In her junior year, she took part in my teaching reform project which analyzed the result of improving mathematic teaching quality. She was so familiar with the model of mathematics that she suggested that we may choose AHP model instead of normal faintness judge way to carry on quantitative analysis, and I accepted her suggestion and finished together the paper of “arrangement analytical method applies on the classroom interaction teaching effective comment” which will be published in the future.
Miss xxx told me that she will apply for finance engineering which is a new field for her. I am glad to recommend this excellent girl who already possessed good quality and strong ability. I therefore lend her my enthusiastic support and would appreciate you favorable consideration of her application.