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（A）
One afternoon my father and I go fishing on a 76.______________
riverside. We found the water was very dirty that 77.______________
we could not see the bottom. We also found some 78.______________
rubbish or dead fish flowing on the water. That 79.______________
afternoon, my father and I caught only a smaller fish. 80.______________ Why do the fish in the river die? That was because 81.______________ of a lot of factories along the river always 82.______________ poured its waste water and rubbish into the river 83.______________
and the water got polluting（污染）. Thus, most of the 84.______________ fish in the river killed. 85.______________
（B）
Ken is a young man and have a big dog and a small 86.____________ car. Last Sunday he did some shopping for hour in a 87____________ shop and then ran out and jump into a car. His dog 88.____________ came after him, but it jumped into the next one. 89.____________ Ken saw it and shouted it, but the dog still stayed 90.____________
in that car. Ken gave his key into the lock of the car, 91.____________
but the key couldn't turn on. Ken looked at the car 92.____________
again. It was not him! He was in the wrong car, 93.____________
when the dog was in the right one! At last the young 94.____________
man was smiled and got into his car with the dog. 95.____________
答案：
76. go→went 77.very→so 78.√ 79.or→and 80.smaller→small 81. do→did 82. 删去第一个 “of” 83. its→their 84.polluting→polluted 85.∧were 86. has 87. hours/an hour 88. jumped 89. √ 90. at 91. put 92. on. 93. his 94. while 95. was
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Dear Elli，
I’m a senior student. I like making friend with 76. ____
people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. 77. ____
But in last week I found that one of my friends 78. ____
wrote in her English diary that she dislikes me. 79. ____
He doesn’t want to be my friend any more. Now 80. ____
she has started making fun of me because of I’m 81. ____
fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend 82. ____
towards me? My other problem is trying to lose weight. 83. ____
Do I do more exercises? Use pills? And do you 84. ____
know any other way？Please give me some advices. 85. ____
Yours,
Mary
76. friend→friends 77. for→with 78. 去掉 in 79. dislikes→disliked 80. He→She 81. 去掉第二个of 82. friend→friendly 83. √ 84. And→Or 85. advices→advice
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Something about the Internet
We are all busy talking about and use the Internet 86．______
which set up in the l960s． At first, the Internet was only 87．______
used by the government, but in the early l970’s, the banks, 88．______
universities and hospitals were allowed to use them , too． 89．______
However, computers were still very expensive but the 90．______
Internet was difficulty to us. By the start of the 1990s, 91．______
computers become cheaper and easier． 92．______
Today it’s easy to get on-line and it’s said that millions 93．______
people use the Internet every day． Send E-mail is more and 94．______
more popular among students． It has now become one of the 95．______
most important parts of people’s life
86．use→using 87．which 后加was 88．去掉banks前的the 89．them→it 90．but→and 91．difficulty→difficult 92．become→became 93．millions 后加of 94．Send→Sending 95．√
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Jimmy was only eight years. He wanted to learn 1．________
to play the piano. So his mother found the teacher 2．________
for him. At first Jimmy was happy with the 3．________
teacher because he was too strict with him. He decided 4．________
to leave him, but his mother explained him that 5．________
if the teacher made the lessons too easily and 6．________
allow him to do as he wished, he would never learn 7．________
nothing. After thinking about this a few minutes, 8．________
Jimmy thought of that his mother was quite right. Then 9．________
the teacher taught him in two years. 10．________
．1．去掉years或将其后加old 2．the-a3．was后加not 4．√5．explained后加 to 6．easily-easy7．allow-allowed 8．nothing-anything 9．去掉of 10．in-for
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Mr Smith, a strong man worked in a bank in England, 76__________
suddenly fell ill in last week. After some examination, his 77__________
doctor said the terrible pain was in his stomach was probably 78__________
cause by some disease. But Mr Smith believed he must have eaten 79_______
something unfit to him. Then some day Mr Smith thought 80_________
of the chemical factory which he had worked. It stood right on 81_________
the seaside. Poison flowed into the sea. People never swim 82_________
in the sea because the water harmed every things in it. The air 83_______
around was sometimes poisonous too. Mr Smith stopped thinking. 84_______
He shocked by the conclusion-the root of the illness. 85________
76．Worked改为working 77. 划去in 78.划去第一个was
79. cause 改为caused 80. some改为one 81. which改为where
82. swim改为swam 83. things改为thing 84. 85. He 后加was
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Dear Xiao Jun,
It is four days since Mother accepted the 1. _______________
operation. She is feeling much more better now. 2. _______________
The doctors told me the operation was successful, 3. _______________
but because her old age she had to stay in hospital 4. _______________
for other two weeks. The doctors also said it was 5. _______________
unnecessary for her to do so. We expect to get 6. _______________
a full report in two and three days. Please tell the 7. _______________
good news to the rest of family as soon as possible. 8. _______________
You needn’t to come here. I’m able to look after 9. _______________
Mother by myself. Just take good care yourself. 10. ______________
1. accepted ---received 2. 去more 3. 正确 4. because of 5. other ----another
6. necessary 7.in a day or two 8. the family 9. needn’t come 10. take care of
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After I finished my school, I began to look for a job. 76.
Now several months has passed, and I haven’t found the 77.
job I’m interested. Last Sunday morning, I received a 78.
phone call from a man naming Mr Wang. He said on the 79.
phone, “I hear you do well on your studies. I may offer 80.
you a job.” I entered into his office with a beating 81.
heart. How I wished I will go through the job-hunting 82.
talk and that he would take on me as a lab assistant. And 83.
to my surprised, what he said made me feel disappointed. 84.
That he needed was only a model. 85.
76. 去掉my 77.√ 78. interested后加in 79. naming→named 80. on→in 81. 去掉into 82. will→would 83. And→But 84. surprised→surprise 85. That→What
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I’ve been to Hong Kong for three days now, and I’m 71.
having great time. Yesterday my friend showed me 72.
about Hong Kong. It was a very busy day, but I saw 73.
many interesting things. The first place where we visited 74.
is Hong Kong Park. After that, we walked to St.John’s 75.
Cathedral. I think it is a very old church in Hong Kong. 76.
Then we go to Victoria Peak. There we could see all 77.
over Hong Kong. It was real wonderful. After lunch 78.
we caught a bus to a supermarket. On the bus back the 79.
hotel, we both felt tired and very happy. We enjoyed 80.
ourselves very much.
71:to-in, 72:having-/\a 73:about-around 74:where-that或省略掉where 75:is-was 76:\/ 77:go-went 78:real-really 79: back-back/\to 80:and-but
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Keep healthy is an important way of our life. A 76. ________
person has good health is more efficient(有效的) in 77. ________
carrying out their task either as a student in a school, 78. ________
a worker in an office and even a housewife at home. 79. ________
There are different way to keep healthy. It is necessary 80. ________
to have a healthy diet every day. Different kinds of 81. ________
food has different functions in building up and 82. ________
keeping our bodies strong. Other way to keep healthy 83. ________
is to exercise regularly. Learning what to relax(放松) 84. ________
our body is certainly in an efficient way to keep healthy. 85. ________
76. Keep→Keeping 77. has前加who 78. their→his 79. and→or 80. way→ways
81. √ 82. has→have 83. Other→Another 84. what→how 85. 去掉in
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After I finished my school, I began to look for a job. 76.
Now several months has passed, and I haven’t found the 77.
job I’m interested. Last Sunday morning, I received a 78.
phone call from a man naming Mr Wang. He said on the 79.
phone, “I hear you do well on your studies. I may offer 80.
you a job.” I entered into his office with a beating 81.
heart. How I wished I will go through the job-hunting 82.
talk and that he would take on me as a lab assistant. And 83.
to my surprised, what he said made me feel disappointed. 84.
That he needed was only a model. 85.
76. 去掉my 77.√ 78. interested后加in 79. naming→named 80. on→in
81. 去掉into 82. will→would 83. And→But 84. surprised→surprise 85. That→What
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A artist left for a beautiful part of the country 91. ___________
for a holiday and stay with a farmer. Every day 92. ___________
he went out with his brushes and painted till evening, 93.____________
and then, when it got in dark he went back to the 94. ___________
farm and had a good dinner after going to bed. 95.____________
At the end of his holiday, he wanted to pay for the 96.____________
farmer, so the farmer said, “ I just want one of your 97.____________
picture. In a week, it will all be finished. But your 98. ____________
picture will be still here.” The painter was very pleasant 99. ___________
and thanked the farmer for saying so kind things about 100. ___________
his paintings.
91. An 92. stayed 93. √ 94. 去掉 in 95. before 96. for去掉 97. but 98. pictures 99. pleased 100. such
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Waves are beautiful to look but they can destroy 1. ___________
ships at sea, as well as houses and buildings near 2. ___________
the shore. Which causes waves? Most waves are caused 3. ___________
by winds blowing against the surface of the water. The 4. ___________
sun heats the earth, causing the air rise and the 5. ___________
winds to blow. The winds blow cross the sea, pushing 6. ___________
a little waves into bigger and bigger ones. The size 7. ___________
of a wave depends how strong the wind is, how long 8. ___________
it blows, and how heavy the body of water is. In 9. ___________
a small bay(海湾)big waves will never build up. 10. ___________
So at sea the wind can build up powerful waves. 11. ___________
A rule says that the height for a wave (in 12. ___________
meters) will usually be no more than one-tenths of 13. ___________
the wind's speed( in kilometres). In another words, 14. ___________
when the wind is blowing 120 kilometres per hour, most 15. ___________
waves will be about twelve metres.
1. look →look at 2. √ 3. Which→What 4. against→over 5. rise→ to rise 6.cross→across 7. a little→little 8. depends→depends on (upon) 9.heavy→large (big) 10. √ 11. So →But 12. for→of 13. one-tenths→one-tenth 14. another→other 15. blowing→blowing at
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Mr． Fox lived close a large clothing 76． ＿＿＿＿
shop． For a long time he had meant to buy some 77． ＿＿＿＿
of the clothes． Before doing so， he keep a close watch 78． ＿＿＿＿
at the shop for several days． As the shop was in 79． ＿＿＿＿
an old building with chimneys（烟囱）， so he decided to 80． ＿＿＿＿
get into the shop through one of the chimney． One 81． ＿＿＿＿
dark night long after midnight， he climbed onto a 82． ＿＿＿＿
roof of the shop． But he went down one chimney， 83． ＿＿＿＿
he got stuck and could neither climb down or up． 84． ＿＿＿＿
He shouted for help but there had no one in the shop． 85． ＿＿＿＿
76．close后加 to 77． buy→steal 78． keep→kept 79．∨
80． 去掉so 81． chimney→chimneys 82． a→the
83． he前加when 84． or→nor 85． had→was
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Attention， please！ I’m sorry to tell you that the visit to 56． ＿＿＿
the country， that we planned for this morning， will 57． ＿＿
be put off until tomorrow because the rain． This morning 58． ＿＿
we will visit a middle school， where has a history of 85 59． ＿＿
years． This afternoon we’ll visit the industry exhibition， from 60． ＿
which many new products are in show． Some of them 61．
won nation prizes for invention． The bus will wait for 62． ＿＿＿
us at the gate of our hotel at a half past eight． Please be 63． ＿＿＿
there on time． Don’t forget to bringing your things you need 64． ＿＿
with you． If you had any questions， you can ask me． Thanks． 65． ＿
56． ∨ 57． that → which 58． because 后加of 59． where→ which
60． from → in 61． in → on 62． nation → national
63． 去掉a 64． bringing →bring 65． had →have
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It is late in the evening． There was a knock on the 56． ＿＿＿
door． I opened it and found a young man wore dark 57． ＿＿＿
glasses． He said he was a friend of my brother． I didn't 58． ＿＿＿
remember my brother had such friend， but I had to let 59． ＿＿＿
him in． As we talked， I found that he knew something 60． ＿＿
about my brother． I came to the conclusion （结论） that 61． ＿＿＿
he was telling the truth． Just then my brother came 62． ＿＿＿
out and the stranger was taken by surprise． I caught 63． ＿＿＿
hold of the man while my brother rang up to the police． 64． ＿＿＿
In fact he was only a thief from other town nearby． 65． ＿＿＿
56． is→was 57． wore→wearing 58． brother→brother’s
59． such后加a 60． something→nothing 61． ∨ 62． was后加not 63． out→in／back 64． 去掉to 65． other→another
Once more， three men bought seventeen apples． The 56． ＿＿＿＿＿
first man wanted one half； the second， one three and 57． ＿＿＿＿＿
the third one， one ninth． It was possible to divide 58． ＿＿＿＿＿
those seventeen apples like they wanted． Just as they 59． ＿＿＿＿＿
didn’t know how to do， a small boy came up with an 60． ＿＿＿＿＿
apple on his hand． The boy said，“Don’t worry about 61． ＿＿＿＿＿
that． Let me divide it for you．” First of all， with his 62． ＿＿＿＿＿
apple added to them， he made the number apples 63． ＿＿＿＿＿
eighteen． Then he gives nine to the first man， six to the 64． ＿＿＿＿＿
second man and two to the third man． He gave away 65． ＿＿＿＿＿
seventeen in all and took his own for himself． These men
were very thankful tothe boy． They all said ，“How clever
a boy he is ！”
56．去掉more 57．three →third 58． possible→impossible
59． like→as 60． how→what 61． on→in 62． it→them
63． number 后加 of 64． gives →gave 65． √
Different people speak different language， 76．＿＿but sports have a language of its own． A football 77．＿＿player from Japan can not play with a player from 78．＿＿England． One does not need to understand the language 79．＿＿of the other． The game speaks for themselves． 80．＿＿Peoples who do not know each other often become 81．＿＿friend after they have played together． The new 82．＿＿boy or girl in school quickly become one of the 83．＿＿class after few games． People in different parts of 84．＿＿the world learn to understand one other through sports． 85．＿＿＿＿
76． language → languages 77． its → their 78．去掉not 79． ∨ 80． themselves → itself 81．Peoples → People 82． friend → friends 83． become→becomes84． few 前加 a 85． other → another
Dear Ron,
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to 76._________
our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school 77. _________
to you. Our school is a famous school with long history. 78. _________
We have many experienced teacher and excellent equipment. 79. _________
There are two teach buildings, one is for seniors and the 80. _________
other is for juniors. There are two lab building and 81. _________
a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and 82. _________
chemistry, we have some electives (选修课). The 83. _________
students can choose that they like to attend. We 84. _________
love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon. 85. _________
Yours,
Li Hua
76. exciting→excited 77. 去掉to 78. with后加a 79.teacher→teachers
80. teach→teaching 81. building→buildings 82. except→besides 83.√
84. that→what 85. meet→meeting